I was literally sobbing and bawling while playing the whole thing 😭 I couldn't even physically choose the options to pursue another RO 😭y u do this 😭😭😭
Wasnt expecting much from this since ive seen a lot of ifs that had 100k+ words but its mostly tedious stuff, but your game really made want to read every single line, especially the mc interaction with Athiel (love seeing them flustered btw), definitely one of my fav ifs from this year, keep up the good work, and if it helps to know im a big fan!
Going down Travis' route in chapter 1 and the name suddenly changes to Leon. Its a bit off-putting. It switches back to Travis when you go back home but at least 4 pages of it is Leon.
I cried... it did hurt. I felt the stress. The pain of losing someone then having to deal with an added pile of stress. I imagined it and I am the one who felt like breaking. The story is amazing and will continue to follow
Yeah, I saw some errors and will fix them when I notice them or when people report them to me (I already started with a few today while writing something on the side).
Also, thank you! Writing 100k words is tiring, but I loved every minute of it, so I guess that's fine. Probably.
Nope no date with a ghost I'm afraid (unless? Just kidding! Or am I...?)
I saw the fix above and appreciate it! The writing is lovely and really well paced. Ghost marriage really bringing a new meaning to love after death.
Looking back, I apologize if my first comment sounded rough. I have wrinkle picking moments but it's all out of love for the story 👍 Is there a way to submit a report of what we find?
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I was literally sobbing and bawling while playing the whole thing 😭 I couldn't even physically choose the options to pursue another RO 😭y u do this 😭😭😭
I found some bugs
Thank you for the screenshots! Currently fixing the whole chap1 :))
My heart is broken. 😭😭😭
Lemme go buy some glue, gotta fix that
Wasnt expecting much from this since ive seen a lot of ifs that had 100k+ words but its mostly tedious stuff, but your game really made want to read every single line, especially the mc interaction with Athiel (love seeing them flustered btw), definitely one of my fav ifs from this year, keep up the good work, and if it helps to know im a big fan!
Glad to see someone appreciate Athiel; kinda hard when they're so determined to ruin the MC's mood most of the time
Thank you for loving my work!
Going down Travis' route in chapter 1 and the name suddenly changes to Leon. Its a bit off-putting. It switches back to Travis when you go back home but at least 4 pages of it is Leon.
Should be fixed! Hope it didn't completely break your immersion.
I should have been warned by the "don't get too attached"
Who can resist El? They're such a sweetheart
It felt so real. I can't stop crying.
I feel like I just lost the love of my life, ffs!😭I mean... now you got 4 sweet ROs, isn't it nice? (I cried too when I wrote the prologue...)
Just whyyyyy. Omg the way i cried. 😭
I'm sorry😭😭
I cried... it did hurt. I felt the stress. The pain of losing someone then having to deal with an added pile of stress. I imagined it and I am the one who felt like breaking. The story is amazing and will continue to follow
If you’re feeling something, it means I’m doing my job right. So I hope that when things get better in the story, it will resonate just as much!
There's a some misspelled/misplaced variables but the word count for a project that just started... holy
Agree with 👇. Date a ghost option when/j
Yeah, I saw some errors and will fix them when I notice them or when people report them to me (I already started with a few today while writing something on the side).
Also, thank you! Writing 100k words is tiring, but I loved every minute of it, so I guess that's fine. Probably.
Nope no date with a ghost I'm afraid (unless? Just kidding! Or am I...?)
I saw the fix above and appreciate it! The writing is lovely and really well paced. Ghost marriage really bringing a new meaning to love after death.
Looking back, I apologize if my first comment sounded rough. I have wrinkle picking moments but it's all out of love for the story 👍 Is there a way to submit a report of what we find?
No, no, don't worry; you didn't sound rough at all to me.
To report bugs/errors, you can either send them to me on Tumblr via asks or simply email me: echonoirstories@gmail.com
YOO FIRE EMOJI... i miss elias BRING BACK MY KING 😭
Sorry can't do..... but thanks!