no fr i was searching for some games to play and found this was intrigued by the description only to mindlessly scroll a bit down to see that LMAO i stay getting spoiled sighs
It's alright i was just telling it to the person so they could edit their comment if they wanted (i already played all that's out weeks ago 🤭, so it wasn't a spoiler for me) and also thank you (Love the If/game btw, the characters are real and loveable)
guys i cried my heart out for elias , i felt every emotion there and her grieve was so heartbreaking. the nightmares and the empty house . and the cat , my god i really cant move on , elias was too good
Se um abençoado dia você quiser fazer um pov onde o/a Elias/Ellie estivesse vivos e sobrevividos. Além disso o jogo tá incrível, juro que chorei horrores quando nosso querido par morreu 😭!(Mas sigo com seu/sua irmão/irmã ❤️🔥)
Hey! Just wanted to say, don't know if you know about this but, there should be a short story from El's POV, where it's not them that dies but the Mc! It's just the morning but i thought i could let you know
I know about this (and I cried a lot more), but I say there should be just a few more scenes in the extras or even the full game (if the creator wants) where they have a peaceful life and maybe even the children they wanted so much or even the marriage and how it was and so on...
I love this game so much that I recommended it to my friend and she loved it.
I just miss this game because I can't have chemistry with any of the others other than Elias/Ellie😭😭
OHHHH GOD I HAD ONLY PLAYED THE FIRST CHAPTERS AND DIDN'T CONTINUE PLAYING BECAUSE I WAS SAD WITH HIM AND THEN I ENDED UP SEEING A COMMENT FROM YOU SAYING HE'S ALIVE?!!
I love this game and it motivated me even more 😆💯💥
lmao at least i helped a little, and i do agree it would be cool if there were more scenes with El! And dunno how many chapters this will have but i feel like there will be a lot more scenses with them
So that's why El's mother (Juliet but who cares) wouldn't let us to go to the funeral. BECAUSE THERE WASN'T ONE. And she probably wanted the Mc to move out so El can live there? It's possible since they now live with their parents and maybe Juliet wanted them to have somewhere they can live once they heal and can take care if themselves. ANYWAYS God i hate that woman with my whole heart, she lied about El's death WHY just why would she even do that??? Honestly i can't even sympathies with her, she saw how much the Mc was hurting because of it, after all someone they loved "died". I really want to know why she did it but i just know my Mc WON'T forgive her like idc she's mother of El and Athiel, what she did isn't really forgiveable. Maybe if she tried but THAT WOMAN EVEN HIT MC. Her child is still alive and she's acting as if the Mc killed them. Done ranting about my hate for Juliet for now 🤗
ALSO WHO THE F IS ROBIN AND WHY ARE YOU CALLING EL BABY 👊😤
AHHH I TOTALLY AGREE WITH THAT. I DEF THINK JULIET WANTED US TO LEAVE SO ELIAS CAN MOVE IN💔 THEN SHE TURNED IT AROUND ON US WITH EL'S DAD BY SAYING WE DIDN'T WANT EL BACK :(
JULIET IS SUCH A BITCH. :((
now she's trying to set El up with this mf named ROBIN?! LIKE WHO. NO. EL CLEARLY HAD A BAD RELATIONSHIP WITH THEM. EW. 😭🙏
AND SHE'S THREATENING SOMEONE TO KEEP EL AWAY FROM US :( I JUST WANT ELIAS BACK😭🙏
Nah cause i hate Juliet with my whole heart. She is honestly hurting the Pc and both of her children. I honestly don't understand what is her deal and why does she hate Pc so much, like we did nothing 😭.
About Robin i agree they probably had a bad relationship. From what we saw, It wasn't the best relationship but Robin maybe still wants El (which like, back off, El doesn't want you and is our almost fiancée)
I think 43 if im correct about the numbers by the ROs names in the introductions/thing (its 2am forgive me if that didnt make sense)- dont think it was openly said though
I'm so HOOKED! Youve just been spoiling us with all these updates. I am shook from the latest chapter 3 twist and i cant WAIT FOR MORE. You are my interactive fiction god. 100/100
LOVE THIS THING SM. I really liked how you managed to portray the depression and anguish of the [narrator] after E's passing and offered all those choices to still make us form the core of their character, the characters were all pretty interesting to read about and interact with, each with such different personality and reactions to our actions : all routes were given a fair amount of content (which I greatly appreciate), and just to end THE TWIST ?? cannot say i was 100% surprised especially after that one drunk call by ma'am doc at 1 am but DANG it still hit. All the scenes with Juliet and her thoughts were genuinely making me uncomfortable and I admit I wished I do actually something about her actions more than once but hey, what can I do about that huh, I'm only a reader.
Pour finir, sincèrement bravo pour le boulot d'écriture ; les tournures des phrases étaient vraiment plaisantes et expressives et je me retrouve agréablement surprise en réalisant que c'est une française qui ai écrit tout ça. Merci beaucoup pour votre travail.
i stopped playing this bcoz i only want Elias and none other... BUT YOURE TELLING ME HES STILL ALIVE?? BRO IM LITERALLY CRYING 😭 My beloved is back!!! MY LOVE AAAAAAAA
My heart broke when i realised his memories are messed up and he doesnt remember MC (amnesia trope strikes once again i see, its okay i'll gladly swallow this knife if it means hes back)
I hope the story wont drag out the 'lost memories' thing or worse make it messier by making him accept his ex or smth like that (PLEASE dont make him betray MC i beg you 😭 its bad enough that he doesnt remembers us) Otherwise i wouldnt be able to handle it, it would be too heavy on angst and dramatic AND i would start bawling istg 💀💀
WATCH OUT JULIET, IM UNDER YOUR BED. MATTER OF FACT, HIS WHOLE FAMILY BETTER SLEEP WITH ONE EYE OPEN 😀
ALSO THAT EX BETTER STAY TF AWAY FROM MY ELIAS 👺 HES MY BOYFRIEND, NOT HERS. BE GONE SHOO!
sorry i just needed to vent bcoz the plot got me rlly invested and i personally feel attacked whenever something bad happens (rip me) glad i didnt overreact 🙂
Woooo! o((*^▽^*))oo((*^▽^*))o Thank you so much for the Athiel fluffs gosh darn 😭😭 they're so cute I wanna hug them to death (not that I want them to die noo)
okay i'm back and i wanted to leave a non spoilery (or less spoilery?) comment here so: i wanna say i've been LOVING the POVs in chapter 3, especially with T's romance!! idk if i'm reading this right, but they're just so... not normal LOL i love them <3 trying so hard to look nonchalant but they fold at literally every turn and may be juuust a little insane for MC. really interested in how everyone's romance but especially T's will play out
Totally agree!!! T is just so cute to tease :) I also love their responsibility at work as well as their dedication to give MC comfort without saying anything ;)
Uhm WHAT THE FUCK??? EL IS ALIVE??? HELLO??? IM FEELING SO MANY EMOTIONS RN ˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥⌓˂̣̣̥ )‧º·˚ (though i will admit, as we barely saw el in the beginning. . . I didnt really grow that attached to them so im not affected that much if that makes sense?)
And juliet?! Oh juliet. . . While i cant legally say everything i wanna say. . . She better sleep with one eye open ( •̀_•́ )🔪
And my lord! How DARE our cat not save us from that demon(cockroach)!? I thought the cat loved us. . . (◞ ‸ ◟ㆀ)
Still want ekissa to kiss me on my hot mouth btw (˵ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°˵)
Editing because i wanna add smthing else: i wonder how mc would feel/react to finding out El is really alive and stuff, because like. . . imagine finding out the person who basically like. . . Saved you and showed you what love really is(i guess??) And basically just gave you a knew life that you thought died was actually alive? I feel mf would actually fully break
NON-SPOILER PART
I’ve been reading since the first demo drop and I regularly come back to both this and the bonus content available to us,,,,I’m so in love with everyone and cannot wait for things to start picking up in the next chapter, especially after that twist!! Looking forward to what comes next <3
SPOILERS BEYOND
Honestly, the twist hasn't firmly settled itself into the 'excited' or 'disappointed' camp yet - I think I'm more curious about its consequences than the actual twist itself at this point. That being said!! I hope we get to decide whether or not forgiveness is in the cards for our MC once the truth is out. I want to be able to place blame on Athiel and Juliet and the friends, because what they're doing (keeping this HUGE secret from someone who has been grieving El for MONTHS and is clearly not doing well!! plus the morality of not providing el with all the information they need to make informed decisions) is super fucked up and deserves to have an equally emotional and big moment. The anger, betrayal, and sorrow that would come from a bomb like this would be HUGE, and it deserves to be ugly and raw.
So, I’m super excited!! I love hurt/comfort and angst, and this is such a good opportunity for both. <333
i may kill juliet. like what else is there for her to do other than die BC WHAT THE HELL?? i honestly was camp "I want El to be alive" but now that it's been so long, I was on the way to accepting it AND THEN WE GET THIS.... I CAN'T... I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY. CHAT WHAT NOW
ELIIASSSSS MY BABBY IS ALIVEE. WHATNAIZNSJZ. I HATE JULIET MOORREEE. I HATE THAT MF. HATE HERRR. HER THREATENING WHOEVER??? WHAYTTT. ALSO HER LETTING MY BABY'S EXXXX BACKKKKKK???????? NOOOO. I HATE THIS BITCCCHHH. MYYY BABY ELIASSSS.. ALSO HIM HATING HIMSELF? NOOOOO. I WANT HIMMMM BACKKK PLEASEEEEE. ALSO VAYLIN THREATING THAT GUY? TY. TYYY. YESSS. I LOVE VAYLIN SM. ALSO I STILL DESPISE JULIET. SHE CAN BURN UP IN THE CAR LIKE ELIAS DIDDDDD. THISSS BITTTCHHHH. HER LYING ABT US NOT WANTING ELIAS BACK??? NOOOOOOOOOO. MY LOVEEEEEEE
I'm not understanding how Aithel is saying nothing, or the 2 friends with the baby. It makes no sense. Its like everyone in this book are assholes. And thats putting it nicely.
Well, it seems to me that Athiel believes some Juliet™ bullshit, so they think the MC knows everything. There's a reason the characters don't talk directly about what happened to El, or why Athiel keeps storming off when others bring it up — so they don't realize that the MC doesn't know. Plus, that would explain why Athiel doesn't understand the MC's grief, or why they advised the MC to date someone else.
I know, it still doesn't look very realistic, but that would make more sense. Or maybe I'm just trying justify my chosen RO's behaviour.
It's definitely a sore spot on the story. Very difficult to believe the MC wouldn't hear from SOMEONE for months on end. Feels very forced, hopefully its wrapped up soon and we can actually start dealing with the situation properly.
Still like the story, but can't help but disagree with the twist. Throws so much off.
Wait. hold on a minute. i think i need a moment wait, wait, wait. Hold on. i need a moment. i need. to sit down i think wait. wait. old honh on, wait, please i am breaking down, hold on, wai
Echo how could you😭😭😭, I'll need therapy 😵💫. It's phenomenal how your writing always leaves me in distress🤧.
Elias......💔 💔 💔
I think you officially broke my mind and my heart tbh... I..I..I, how could you, it hurtsss and fkin juliet that excuse of a human being, along with all others involved😡🤬 what do you think is gonna happen when it all comes to light. I want my baby back Echo😟.
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Thats a very captivating IF. 5 out of 5 stars for me
.. Reminded me VN "Remember ME" while reading
ok way to break my heart now im going to jump off a bus💔💔
OH MY GOD! I LOVET IT ALL, PLEASE KEEP THESE COMMINGGGG!!!!
don't wanna sound mean but at least give a spoiler warning for new players please
no fr i was searching for some games to play and found this was intrigued by the description only to mindlessly scroll a bit down to see that LMAO i stay getting spoiled sighs
Deleted it because of spoiler—sorry, didn't see it until now :((
It's alright i was just telling it to the person so they could edit their comment if they wanted (i already played all that's out weeks ago 🤭, so it wasn't a spoiler for me) and also thank you (Love the If/game btw, the characters are real and loveable)
I feel horrible about moving on after Els death! But T is so sweet 😭
guys i cried my heart out for elias , i felt every emotion there and her grieve was so heartbreaking. the nightmares and the empty house . and the cat , my god i really cant move on , elias was too good
Se um abençoado dia você quiser fazer um pov onde o/a Elias/Ellie estivesse vivos e sobrevividos. Além disso o jogo tá incrível, juro que chorei horrores quando nosso querido par morreu 😭!(Mas sigo com seu/sua irmão/irmã ❤️🔥)
Esperando ansiosamente por novas atualizações!
Hey! Just wanted to say, don't know if you know about this but, there should be a short story from El's POV, where it's not them that dies but the Mc! It's just the morning but i thought i could let you know
I know about this (and I cried a lot more), but I say there should be just a few more scenes in the extras or even the full game (if the creator wants) where they have a peaceful life and maybe even the children they wanted so much or even the marriage and how it was and so on...
I love this game so much that I recommended it to my friend and she loved it.
I just miss this game because I can't have chemistry with any of the others other than Elias/Ellie😭😭
We want at least a happy ending from them 🙇♀️
OHHHH GOD I HAD ONLY PLAYED THE FIRST CHAPTERS AND DIDN'T CONTINUE PLAYING BECAUSE I WAS SAD WITH HIM AND THEN I ENDED UP SEEING A COMMENT FROM YOU SAYING HE'S ALIVE?!!
I love this game and it motivated me even more 😆💯💥
lmao at least i helped a little, and i do agree it would be cool if there were more scenes with El! And dunno how many chapters this will have but i feel like there will be a lot more scenses with them
Just wanted to point out something
There's her number instead of his number when we are talking about the MC's dad.
Soo just saying ig
Will fix it when I'm done with the rewrite, thx!!
only started but ARE YOU KIDDING ME JULIET?!!
!!!SPOILERS!!!
So that's why El's mother (Juliet but who cares) wouldn't let us to go to the funeral. BECAUSE THERE WASN'T ONE. And she probably wanted the Mc to move out so El can live there? It's possible since they now live with their parents and maybe Juliet wanted them to have somewhere they can live once they heal and can take care if themselves. ANYWAYS God i hate that woman with my whole heart, she lied about El's death WHY just why would she even do that??? Honestly i can't even sympathies with her, she saw how much the Mc was hurting because of it, after all someone they loved "died". I really want to know why she did it but i just know my Mc WON'T forgive her like idc she's mother of El and Athiel, what she did isn't really forgiveable. Maybe if she tried but THAT WOMAN EVEN HIT MC. Her child is still alive and she's acting as if the Mc killed them. Done ranting about my hate for Juliet for now 🤗
ALSO WHO THE F IS ROBIN AND WHY ARE YOU CALLING EL BABY 👊😤
YESS. I LIVE FOR THE JULIET HATE😭🙏.
Anyways spoilers bc I'm ranting too
AHHH I TOTALLY AGREE WITH THAT. I DEF THINK JULIET WANTED US TO LEAVE SO ELIAS CAN MOVE IN💔 THEN SHE TURNED IT AROUND ON US WITH EL'S DAD BY SAYING WE DIDN'T WANT EL BACK :(
JULIET IS SUCH A BITCH. :((
now she's trying to set El up with this mf named ROBIN?! LIKE WHO. NO. EL CLEARLY HAD A BAD RELATIONSHIP WITH THEM. EW. 😭🙏
AND SHE'S THREATENING SOMEONE TO KEEP EL AWAY FROM US :( I JUST WANT ELIAS BACK😭🙏
Giving kinda spoiler warning for new players
Nah cause i hate Juliet with my whole heart. She is honestly hurting the Pc and both of her children. I honestly don't understand what is her deal and why does she hate Pc so much, like we did nothing 😭.
About Robin i agree they probably had a bad relationship. From what we saw, It wasn't the best relationship but Robin maybe still wants El (which like, back off, El doesn't want you and is our almost fiancée)
Played this 2 months ago and oh my goodness WHY DON'T I GET A NOTIFICATION WHEN IT UPDATES 😭😭
We were left on cliffhanger, worst is the chapter came out 24 days ago I'M LATE
I don't know if it said or if I might have just missed it, but how old is Luna?
I think 43 if im correct about the numbers by the ROs names in the introductions/thing (its 2am forgive me if that didnt make sense)- dont think it was openly said though
Oh, I completely missed those, lol. Thank you!
No problem! （｡>‿‿<｡ ）
Me cri
I love this game so much! Thank you for making it <3
This game is just it hits the spot idk.
spoilers below cause i don’t ruin yalls day
didn’t listen to the elias warning at the beginning and got way too attached to him… paid the price. now the little bitch doesn’t remember me :(
“mom I’m so hungry I could elli-“
Was stalking you a little 😌 and IT WAS YOU WHO MADE THIS COMMENT? 😭😭
AHAH YES🙏😭
Juliet watch your back I’m coming for you.
I just started reading this and OH MY GOD I'M ALREADY SOBBING. I don't know if I'm just too emotional or what.
This story has me hooked line and sinker lol. I look forward to more of it!!!
I'm so HOOKED! Youve just been spoiling us with all these updates. I am shook from the latest chapter 3 twist and i cant WAIT FOR MORE. You are my interactive fiction god. 100/100
Love this a lot! There are js some glitches for characters because sometimes the switch names to the other gender.
I also get this gender switch at times. Thats the only glitch ive noticed
Dang, sorry about that. I'll get it fixed when I'm done with the rewrite :)
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LOVE THIS THING SM. I really liked how you managed to portray the depression and anguish of the [narrator] after E's passing and offered all those choices to still make us form the core of their character, the characters were all pretty interesting to read about and interact with, each with such different personality and reactions to our actions : all routes were given a fair amount of content (which I greatly appreciate), and just to end THE TWIST ?? cannot say i was 100% surprised especially after that one drunk call by ma'am doc at 1 am but DANG it still hit. All the scenes with Juliet and her thoughts were genuinely making me uncomfortable and I admit I wished I do actually something about her actions more than once but hey, what can I do about that huh, I'm only a reader.
Pour finir, sincèrement bravo pour le boulot d'écriture ; les tournures des phrases étaient vraiment plaisantes et expressives et je me retrouve agréablement surprise en réalisant que c'est une française qui ai écrit tout ça. Merci beaucoup pour votre travail.
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i stopped playing this bcoz i only want Elias and none other... BUT YOURE TELLING ME HES STILL ALIVE?? BRO IM LITERALLY CRYING 😭 My beloved is back!!! MY LOVE AAAAAAAA
My heart broke when i realised his memories are messed up and he doesnt remember MC (amnesia trope strikes once again i see, its okay i'll gladly swallow this knife if it means hes back)
I hope the story wont drag out the 'lost memories' thing or worse make it messier by making him accept his ex or smth like that (PLEASE dont make him betray MC i beg you 😭 its bad enough that he doesnt remembers us) Otherwise i wouldnt be able to handle it, it would be too heavy on angst and dramatic AND i would start bawling istg 💀💀
WATCH OUT JULIET, IM UNDER YOUR BED. MATTER OF FACT, HIS WHOLE FAMILY BETTER SLEEP WITH ONE EYE OPEN 😀
ALSO THAT EX BETTER STAY TF AWAY FROM MY ELIAS 👺 HES MY BOYFRIEND, NOT HERS. BE GONE SHOO!
sorry i just needed to vent bcoz the plot got me rlly invested and i personally feel attacked whenever something bad happens (rip me) glad i didnt overreact 🙂
Woooo! o((*^▽^*))oo((*^▽^*))o Thank you so much for the Athiel fluffs gosh darn 😭😭 they're so cute I wanna hug them to death (not that I want them to die noo)
REALL THEY’RE THE BEST
okay i'm back and i wanted to leave a non spoilery (or less spoilery?) comment here so: i wanna say i've been LOVING the POVs in chapter 3, especially with T's romance!! idk if i'm reading this right, but they're just so... not normal LOL i love them <3 trying so hard to look nonchalant but they fold at literally every turn and may be juuust a little insane for MC. really interested in how everyone's romance but especially T's will play out
Totally agree!!! T is just so cute to tease :) I also love their responsibility at work as well as their dedication to give MC comfort without saying anything ;)
Such a treaaattt LAD updated!!!! ✨🥰💖💖💖💖
Wait a damn minute..........................
Spoilers for the update under here! ՞ ᗜ ՞
Uhm WHAT THE FUCK??? EL IS ALIVE??? HELLO??? IM FEELING SO MANY EMOTIONS RN ˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥⌓˂̣̣̥ )‧º·˚ (though i will admit, as we barely saw el in the beginning. . . I didnt really grow that attached to them so im not affected that much if that makes sense?)
And juliet?! Oh juliet. . . While i cant legally say everything i wanna say. . . She better sleep with one eye open ( •̀_•́ )🔪
And my lord! How DARE our cat not save us from that demon(cockroach)!? I thought the cat loved us. . . (◞ ‸ ◟ㆀ)
Still want ekissa to kiss me on my hot mouth btw (˵ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°˵)
Editing because i wanna add smthing else: i wonder how mc would feel/react to finding out El is really alive and stuff, because like. . . imagine finding out the person who basically like. . . Saved you and showed you what love really is(i guess??) And basically just gave you a knew life that you thought died was actually alive? I feel mf would actually fully break
wtf..??? Athiel got some 'splainin' to do
Yeah like i love them but EXPLAIN 🤨
NON-SPOILER PART I’ve been reading since the first demo drop and I regularly come back to both this and the bonus content available to us,,,,I’m so in love with everyone and cannot wait for things to start picking up in the next chapter, especially after that twist!! Looking forward to what comes next <3
SPOILERS BEYOND
Honestly, the twist hasn't firmly settled itself into the 'excited' or 'disappointed' camp yet - I think I'm more curious about its consequences than the actual twist itself at this point. That being said!! I hope we get to decide whether or not forgiveness is in the cards for our MC once the truth is out. I want to be able to place blame on Athiel and Juliet and the friends, because what they're doing (keeping this HUGE secret from someone who has been grieving El for MONTHS and is clearly not doing well!! plus the morality of not providing el with all the information they need to make informed decisions) is super fucked up and deserves to have an equally emotional and big moment. The anger, betrayal, and sorrow that would come from a bomb like this would be HUGE, and it deserves to be ugly and raw.So, I’m super excited!! I love hurt/comfort and angst, and this is such a good opportunity for both. <333
comment contains HUGE SPOILERS from chapter 3
i may kill juliet. like what else is there for her to do other than die BC WHAT THE HELL?? i honestly was camp "I want El to be alive" but now that it's been so long, I was on the way to accepting it AND THEN WE GET THIS.... I CAN'T... I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY. CHAT WHAT NOW
Comment contains spoilers 💔
ELIIASSSSS MY BABBY IS ALIVEE. WHATNAIZNSJZ. I HATE JULIET MOORREEE. I HATE THAT MF. HATE HERRR. HER THREATENING WHOEVER??? WHAYTTT. ALSO HER LETTING MY BABY'S EXXXX BACKKKKKK???????? NOOOO. I HATE THIS BITCCCHHH. MYYY BABY ELIASSSS.. ALSO HIM HATING HIMSELF? NOOOOO. I WANT HIMMMM BACKKK PLEASEEEEE. ALSO VAYLIN THREATING THAT GUY? TY. TYYY. YESSS. I LOVE VAYLIN SM. ALSO I STILL DESPISE JULIET. SHE CAN BURN UP IN THE CAR LIKE ELIAS DIDDDDD. THISSS BITTTCHHHH. HER LYING ABT US NOT WANTING ELIAS BACK??? NOOOOOOOOOO. MY LOVEEEEEEE
What does it say about me if I was hoping the plot twist from chapter three would never happen...?
Some typos (chapter 3 spoilers):
Mmmmh, not much except that it's not your cup of tea...? Hahaha— Thanks for the typos report! Will fix it after the rewrite.
Juliet when i get my hands on you- JuLieT WHEN I get my hands upon YOU
I wish I could like your comment so badly. But I’ll just reply instead
YESSS. I AGREE. WHO'S GOT THE PITCH FORKS WE'RE BURNING THIS WITTCHH
I GOT THE PITCHFORKS ⋌༼ •̀ O •́ ༽⋋🔪
I'm not understanding how Aithel is saying nothing, or the 2 friends with the baby. It makes no sense. Its like everyone in this book are assholes. And thats putting it nicely.
Well, it seems to me that Athiel believes some Juliet™ bullshit, so they think the MC knows everything. There's a reason the characters don't talk directly about what happened to El, or why Athiel keeps storming off when others bring it up — so they don't realize that the MC doesn't know. Plus, that would explain why Athiel doesn't understand the MC's grief, or why they advised the MC to date someone else.
I know, it still doesn't look very realistic, but that would make more sense. Or maybe I'm just trying justify my chosen RO's behaviour.
It's definitely a sore spot on the story. Very difficult to believe the MC wouldn't hear from SOMEONE for months on end. Feels very forced, hopefully its wrapped up soon and we can actually start dealing with the situation properly.
Still like the story, but can't help but disagree with the twist. Throws so much off.
UM HELLO?? juliet is actually a sick woman and needs some therapy because what is she doing I wanna reromance el😓
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can i re-romance El
Wait. hold on a minute. i think i need a moment wait, wait, wait. Hold on. i need a moment. i need. to sit down i think wait. wait. old honh on, wait, please i am breaking down, hold on, wai
Seriously tho, GREAT story Echo, bless
lmao what in the what the fuck i wasnt prepared for the twist 😭 lmao i didnt see it coming i thought i was hallucinating bcs i read it at 4am
Echo how could you😭😭😭, I'll need therapy 😵💫. It's phenomenal how your writing always leaves me in distress🤧.
Elias......💔 💔 💔
I think you officially broke my mind and my heart tbh... I..I..I, how could you, it hurtsss and fkin juliet that excuse of a human being, along with all others involved😡🤬 what do you think is gonna happen when it all comes to light. I want my baby back Echo😟.
AUTHOR AUTHOR
GET BACK HERE AND EXPLAIN
AUTHORRRERRRRRRRR
(I say all this with love that update is so evil LOL)