This story had me genuinely so hooked. It currently 7 AM and I've been at this since the evening of yesterday... I couldn't stop.
This story made me cry and squal like a high school girl sometimes, and oh god reading on characters, and specifically on Elias/Ellie's 'But here's a tip: don't get too attached. No, seriously. Don't.' then reading prolouge and chapter 1 had me weeping and sobbing. The twist on the beginning of chapter 3 had me screaming.
Dear gods this story broke my heart multiple times over already, and I am feral for more. I *need* to get to a happy ending for my poor MC, one that includes Elias (and Eki).
The crash-out coming in chapter 4 is gonna be insane, I can't wait!
Considering its brought up repeatedly in a non-joke manner I suspect its a genuine opinion from the author. It would hardly be the first time a young writer thinks early 40s is somehow abnormally old.
Donβt mind me, just waiting for the absolute beautiful angst the moment my MC figures out just what Athiel has been keeping a secret from him (While he was trying to romance her too)
Oh my God, when i read "don't get too attached" about Elias, i thought it would be something completely different and now I end up crying. Now I'm starting to worry, both about the writing skills that had me in tears after just a few pages, and about what will happen next, since the beginning already hurts.
When I first saw Leon, I was so ready to bounce on that thang (I mean, see my username.) I didn't expect to be this SAD still over Elias... A DILF is here...But I'm still mourning...
Nevermind I am NOT to bounce on that thang. Wdym Eki and Athiel are moving out. Pls I'm like a maladjusted chihuahua I cannot handle the separation anxiety ππππππ
I've been reading this for a couple of days and I've only just reached chapter 3 and to avoid giving away any major spoilers I'll just say, Juliet, I hope you burn in hell bitch.
Okay, I can't take this anymore, I have to say it somewhere, so if you don't want spoilers (in case you haven't already) don't read this, I'm just letting off steam.
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For starters, WHAT THE FUCK, why did you have to make E stay alive in episode 3, it would have been better if he stayed dead, at least it wouldn't hurt as much and not to mention everything that involves Juliet afterwards, I hope that when chapter 4 comes out onwards they give her a minimally understandable reason as to why she is so overprotective of E, even if that doesn't excuse all the manipulation and how she controls her family, I'm not looking for her to really redeem herself or anything but just a reason to not hate her so much, It's just because I simply don't like reaching that level of hatred, how much is it?, well he earned the "privilege" of being the third addition to my list of (I need to change the name) characters that I wish death or worse on, and I don't know if it's just because of how well the creator of the story writes or if I simply touch on one of the few topics that bring out the worst in me. Anyway, once the story finally continues I only hope for two things: either they give Juliet that reason to at least "excuse" her overprotective behavior or that she suffers as much as possible.
P.S. Just in case anyone asks (or reads this in general) the other 2 characters on that list are Beth Carver from Trials in Tainted Space and Eliza Queen from BDCC, if you know maybe you understand me a little, if not, I'll leave it to you that one is a slaver with extra steps and a bitch and the other is a doctor/chemist and in both cases neither shows any kind of remorse and/or enjoy what they do, barely showing any appreciation for the lives of others other than their own. (Eliza is forgiven only a little, though in her case it's a bit more personal.)
Okay, last thing, I just want to clarify that if you notice any grammatical errors or anything like that, it's the translator's fault, since English is not my main language and I'm nowhere near mastering it, at least on the pronunciation and writing side, since I can understand it almost perfectly with the exception of words that I don't know how to translate.
Finally got back at reading this after some months and im pleasantly surprised with the emotional turns this plot has up until chapter 3.
The characters all have very unique and funny interactions in a way that is so comforting.
This IF is very good, the way the trauma is written is amazing. It is fascinating to have a text based IF talking about grief! <3
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Okay, Juliet, somehow, became WORST than I imagined, how COULD she do this??!! That's sick behavior right there, I am very curious to know how this plot twist is gonna be handled. Although, according to the game's description, Elias is not a LI in the game so(according to my understanding, nothing confirmed, i believe, but i didnt see much of the authors Tumblr though), welp
And, I think him being alive is especially hutful in Athiels route, argh. Im very invested.
My theory is that the game wont make Elias a LI even if his memory is back. Perhaps his memory is never coming back either. And we'll have to learn to accept that as a character growth point in the story.
nsfw, but would it be possible to just add a choice to let male mc to bottom for Elias in the Prologue instead of topping in the after dinner scene. I donβt really like topping that much π
Love the idea but the execution is really strange to me. Already joking around, talking and meeting people one day after you long-term partner's death took me right out of the emersion.
Choices are often pretty much the same just worded differently, this was very obvious when you ask Travis/Tracee if they are okay with being at your place. 6 answers that are all a variant of "I don't (really) believe you", not even one that's just "okay then" or anything along those lines. We are a grieving person who just lost their partner, all of the light-heartedness, joking, and banter feels extremely cold to me, like Elias/Ellie meant nothing to us.
Maybe you wanted it that way to make it easier for the player, I just wish you would have at least one route that lets the player actually grief and the writing reflect that.
This game made me cry so much π I couldn't help but get attached to Elias in a very short time, he's a sweetheart ππ This is a very good game! I love it!
Wouldn't there be an option to resurrect Elias?π
Hello! Your writing is legitimately really compelling and I love the story so far! There is one thing I would like to point out and it's that I seem to be misgendered a few times? I'm playing a man with he/him pronouns and there was one time Elias referred to me as his girlfriend during dinner and the doctor referring to me as Mrs. Other than that I'm really enjoying the story and looking forward to the rewrite!
Just found this; and boy it is amazing. Beautiful, sweet and tragic. Thank you for this masterpiece, I love you!ππππππππππππ
I really like this game, huhuhuhuhuu I really cried when reading it, your writing is really good! But I heard you are going to rewrite the story, is that true?
can't wait for the next chapter π€π€π€ constantly am rereading this. I'm on my 7th play through already. 10/10 the best romance IF I've found. Literally non stop tears, such a immersive story and unique plot. It's really engrossing and tragic. I love it π―
The way you write is so beautiful! And all the characters have such depth I love getting their perspectives
how am I supposed to love after my girlfriend's death if every single person around me acts like a kid and her sister is an absolute bitch? lol the ROs need more depth to them, it's too much happening all around
I do agree that there are a lot of things happening; that's one of the reasons why I'm doing a rewrite to try to pace it more naturally. I tend to let my thoughts wander while writing or planning, so I get that it can put people off. As for the ROs lacking depth, well, I'll just have to try and do better next time—something I can't promise since I'm still learning as I go. Though, if it's too frustrating for you, it might just not be your cup of tea or how you envisioned the game going. I won't meet everyone's expectations, including yours. That's okay, it happens.
So sorry for the late reply, hope you're doing well.
I'm doing a rewrite at the moment. Started writing chapter 4 a while ago but decided to focus on the rewrite first. It'll probably take another month or so to finish the rewrite. (I'm trying to add and modify only stuff that really needs it, so hopefully it won't take as long as the prologue, which needed a lot of additions.)
Sadly, yes. A lot of things have been implemented, the UI being one of them. I know it's never ideal to start a game all over again, especially when it's already fairly big, but I promise there won't be any more rewrites hahaha. I'll also try to include an option to jump to chapter four for those who aren't interested in those changes and are just as impatient as I am to get to the latest chapter.
I require gasoline. If I can't have my house, they can't have theirs.
Yeah I wasn't expecting to like T so much, I thought E or A would be my favorite. But T turned out to be surprisingly sweet and charming and you know what, half vampire is a bonus! (But is L a vampire then, or did they somehow pull one?)
Tbh my second favorite is probably E (Eki not El tho El was awesome but now they don't remember the MC/PC π) because I JUST LOVE best friends to lovers or how they were kinda in a denial ππ (Oh I'm sure L could pull a vampire quite easily with all that flirting)
no fr i was searching for some games to play and found this was intrigued by the description only to mindlessly scroll a bit down to see that LMAO i stay getting spoiled sighs
It's alright i was just telling it to the person so they could edit their comment if they wanted (i already played all that's out weeks ago π€, so it wasn't a spoiler for me) and also thank you (Love the If/game btw, the characters are real and loveable)
guys i cried my heart out for elias , i felt every emotion there and her grieve was so heartbreaking. the nightmares and the empty house . and the cat , my god i really cant move on , elias was too good
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Gawd, this is so peak. Can't wait for the inevitable reveal, especially when romancing Athiel
This story had me genuinely so hooked. It currently 7 AM and I've been at this since the evening of yesterday... I couldn't stop.
This story made me cry and squal like a high school girl sometimes, and oh god reading on characters, and specifically on Elias/Ellie's 'But here's a tip: don't get too attached. No, seriously. Don't.' then reading prolouge and chapter 1 had me weeping and sobbing. The twist on the beginning of chapter 3 had me screaming.
Keep up the good work, I love this so much!!!!!
Okay this is actually the best IF ever. Eagerly waiting more updates!
Luna might be a freak π
Actually more like a cougar
Dear gods this story broke my heart multiple times over already, and I am feral for more. I *need* to get to a happy ending for my poor MC, one that includes Elias (and Eki).
The crash-out coming in chapter 4 is gonna be insane, I can't wait!
Me patiently and fervently waiting for the next chapter π
God I hope you know that 42 isnt actually old or "advanced age" π
Lmao are you talking abt L? I think it's a poke at their age bc I'm assuming MC is somewhere in their 20's ;)
Considering its brought up repeatedly in a non-joke manner I suspect its a genuine opinion from the author. It would hardly be the first time a young writer thinks early 40s is somehow abnormally old.
It feels like I was transported into this story soap opera style.
I love how the characters all interact with eachother & the MC it really feels alive. I had so much fun playing around
Thank you author ^^
Donβt mind me, just waiting for the absolute beautiful angst the moment my MC figures out just what Athiel has been keeping a secret from him (While he was trying to romance her too)
I got too attached to Ellie/Elias, and now I'm paying the price.
No regrets
How long is the prologue... I have no idea but I flipping cried and am still sad, I knew bro for what three days
I need moreeeeee
-Be L
-Fuck your employee
-Fire them because they caught feelings(?)
-Hire someone who is unqualified because they're your friend and you find them hot
L is kind of a terrible person, huh?
L is special. . . in what way is your picking, but we love L. . . maybe, also your picking! :)
Oh my God, when i read "don't get too attached" about Elias, i thought it would be something completely different and now I end up crying. Now I'm starting to worry, both about the writing skills that had me in tears after just a few pages, and about what will happen next, since the beginning already hurts.
When I first saw Leon, I was so ready to bounce on that thang (I mean, see my username.) I didn't expect to be this SAD still over Elias... A DILF is here...But I'm still mourning...
The comment above was made while reading Prologue. On Chapter One now, and I am officially ready to bounce on that thang.
Nevermind I am NOT to bounce on that thang. Wdym Eki and Athiel are moving out. Pls I'm like a maladjusted chihuahua I cannot handle the separation anxiety ππππππ
Hey so Chapter 3. What in the godda
I've been reading this for a couple of days and I've only just reached chapter 3 and to avoid giving away any major spoilers I'll just say, Juliet, I hope you burn in hell bitch.
Okay, I can't take this anymore, I have to say it somewhere, so if you don't want spoilers (in case you haven't already) don't read this, I'm just letting off steam.
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For starters, WHAT THE FUCK, why did you have to make E stay alive in episode 3, it would have been better if he stayed dead, at least it wouldn't hurt as much and not to mention everything that involves Juliet afterwards, I hope that when chapter 4 comes out onwards they give her a minimally understandable reason as to why she is so overprotective of E, even if that doesn't excuse all the manipulation and how she controls her family, I'm not looking for her to really redeem herself or anything but just a reason to not hate her so much, It's just because I simply don't like reaching that level of hatred, how much is it?, well he earned the "privilege" of being the third addition to my list of (I need to change the name) characters that I wish death or worse on, and I don't know if it's just because of how well the creator of the story writes or if I simply touch on one of the few topics that bring out the worst in me. Anyway, once the story finally continues I only hope for two things: either they give Juliet that reason to at least "excuse" her overprotective behavior or that she suffers as much as possible.
P.S. Just in case anyone asks (or reads this in general) the other 2 characters on that list are Beth Carver from Trials in Tainted Space and Eliza Queen from BDCC, if you know maybe you understand me a little, if not, I'll leave it to you that one is a slaver with extra steps and a bitch and the other is a doctor/chemist and in both cases neither shows any kind of remorse and/or enjoy what they do, barely showing any appreciation for the lives of others other than their own. (Eliza is forgiven only a little, though in her case it's a bit more personal.)
Okay, last thing, I just want to clarify that if you notice any grammatical errors or anything like that, it's the translator's fault, since English is not my main language and I'm nowhere near mastering it, at least on the pronunciation and writing side, since I can understand it almost perfectly with the exception of words that I don't know how to translate.
im so invested in this π T is so sweet
Finally got back at reading this after some months and im pleasantly surprised with the emotional turns this plot has up until chapter 3.
The characters all have very unique and funny interactions in a way that is so comforting.
This IF is very good, the way the trauma is written is amazing. It is fascinating to have a text based IF talking about grief! <3
MAJOR SPOILERS BELOW
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Okay, Juliet, somehow, became WORST than I imagined, how COULD she do this??!! That's sick behavior right there, I am very curious to know how this plot twist is gonna be handled. Although, according to the game's description, Elias is not a LI in the game so(according to my understanding, nothing confirmed, i believe, but i didnt see much of the authors Tumblr though), welp
And, I think him being alive is especially hutful in Athiels route, argh. Im very invested.
My theory is that the game wont make Elias a LI even if his memory is back. Perhaps his memory is never coming back either. And we'll have to learn to accept that as a character growth point in the story.
Major spoilers
Actually Eli IS an LI. It's stated on the author's tumblr if you choose val(the friendship route) you automatically get on their route
and you can ditch the LI whose route you are in to go after him so... uh maximum angst if you go for that on athiel's route?
Tho there is going to be two polys added next update ; Eli/Ekissa and T/Ekissa I think both are V polys so you don't always have to ditch the LIs
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WHAT!!//?? I DIDN'T know that, wooooooow
Poor Athiel in that route, maaan I gotta try that route in friendship's path, thanks for telling me T-T , I gotta check the authors Tumblr more often
And here I thought the game coudnt be more hurtful\emotional hahahag
I am so READY
Really late but spoilers π
I actually think Elias is a LI :) I think you're automatically put with him when you don't pick a romantic route/you stick with Vaylin ;)
No problems! People warned me about that. ^^ Very excited about the next chapters.
Always feels like Iβm actually going through all this heartbreak in real time when I replay thisπ
i got attached... and then heartbroken... TWICE! D:
nsfw, but would it be possible to just add a choice to let male mc to bottom for Elias in the Prologue instead of topping in the after dinner scene. I donβt really like topping that much π
I thought the same. I am by all means not a top nor do I like to be, so I prefer my charactersβ preferences to be like mine.
Love the idea but the execution is really strange to me. Already joking around, talking and meeting people one day after you long-term partner's death took me right out of the emersion.
Choices are often pretty much the same just worded differently, this was very obvious when you ask Travis/Tracee if they are okay with being at your place. 6 answers that are all a variant of "I don't (really) believe you", not even one that's just "okay then" or anything along those lines. We are a grieving person who just lost their partner, all of the light-heartedness, joking, and banter feels extremely cold to me, like Elias/Ellie meant nothing to us.
Maybe you wanted it that way to make it easier for the player, I just wish you would have at least one route that lets the player actually grief and the writing reflect that.
Hey, so I got attached to Elias, and now I can't move on through the prologue. Guys I'm scared π
im assuming you finally emotionally hurt yourself by reading past the prologue like the rest of us (we need more traumatized people trust)
Yep, had me full on ugly crying in public
hate it herein the best way possibleThis game made me cry so much π I couldn't help but get attached to Elias in a very short time, he's a sweetheart ππ This is a very good game! I love it!
Wouldn't there be an option to resurrect Elias?πHello! Your writing is legitimately really compelling and I love the story so far! There is one thing I would like to point out and it's that I seem to be misgendered a few times? I'm playing a man with he/him pronouns and there was one time Elias referred to me as his girlfriend during dinner and the doctor referring to me as Mrs. Other than that I'm really enjoying the story and looking forward to the rewrite!
Just found this; and boy it is amazing. Beautiful, sweet and tragic. Thank you for this masterpiece, I love you!ππππππππππππ
I really like this game, huhuhuhuhuu I really cried when reading it, your writing is really good! But I heard you are going to rewrite the story, is that true?
yeah she's already finished rewriting the prologue n she plans on uploading everything at the same time along w chapter 4
There must be something wrong with Juliet cuz i GASPED after I realized that wild ass plot twist
can't wait for the next chapter π€π€π€ constantly am rereading this. I'm on my 7th play through already. 10/10 the best romance IF I've found. Literally non stop tears, such a immersive story and unique plot. It's really engrossing and tragic. I love it π―
The way you write is so beautiful! And all the characters have such depth I love getting their perspectives
When it said it ended....bro....this game is freaking amazing! I have never felt the characters like this before.I adore it. Wish you well, Echo.
I literally dislike every single RO in this lmao
why? π I understand everyone has their preference so that's why I'm asking. (I personally love every RO)
how am I supposed to love after my girlfriend's death if every single person around me acts like a kid and her sister is an absolute bitch? lol the ROs need more depth to them, it's too much happening all around
I do agree that there are a lot of things happening; that's one of the reasons why I'm doing a rewrite to try to pace it more naturally. I tend to let my thoughts wander while writing or planning, so I get that it can put people off. As for the ROs lacking depth, well, I'll just have to try and do better next time—something I can't promise since I'm still learning as I go. Though, if it's too frustrating for you, it might just not be your cup of tea or how you envisioned the game going. I won't meet everyone's expectations, including yours. That's okay, it happens.
Thanks for your input.
Is chapter four in the works and if so how far is it. Pls I wanna know bc i cant wait for more
So sorry for the late reply, hope you're doing well.
I'm doing a rewrite at the moment. Started writing chapter 4 a while ago but decided to focus on the rewrite first. It'll probably take another month or so to finish the rewrite. (I'm trying to add and modify only stuff that really needs it, so hopefully it won't take as long as the prologue, which needed a lot of additions.)
Does that mean that we have to play the game from the start when the update comes?
Sadly, yes. A lot of things have been implemented, the UI being one of them. I know it's never ideal to start a game all over again, especially when it's already fairly big, but I promise there won't be any more rewrites hahaha. I'll also try to include an option to jump to chapter four for those who aren't interested in those changes and are just as impatient as I am to get to the latest chapter.
Hope that helps!
Love this IF, Travis is my favorite so far.
I'm going to fight Juliet and Robin.I can help if you want, anything i need to bring?You are right this IF is Amazing π€ and T is LSOJDSODIDJ love them, I'm still pretty sure they're part vampire tho
I require gasoline. If I can't have my house, they can't have theirs.Yeah I wasn't expecting to like T so much, I thought E or A would be my favorite. But T turned out to be surprisingly sweet and charming and you know what, half vampire is a bonus! (But is L a vampire then, or did they somehow pull one?)
I'll look for some and bring it with meTbh my second favorite is probably E (Eki not El tho El was awesome but now they don't remember the MC/PC π) because I JUST LOVE best friends to lovers or how they were kinda in a denial ππ (Oh I'm sure L could pull a vampire quite easily with all that flirting)
Thats a very captivating IF. 5 out of 5 stars for me
.. Reminded me VN "Remember ME" while reading
ok way to break my heart now im going to jump off a busππ
OH MY GOD! I LOVET IT ALL, PLEASE KEEP THESE COMMINGGGG!!!!
don't wanna sound mean but at least give a spoiler warning for new players please
no fr i was searching for some games to play and found this was intrigued by the description only to mindlessly scroll a bit down to see that LMAO i stay getting spoiled sighs
Deleted it because of spoiler—sorry, didn't see it until now :((
It's alright i was just telling it to the person so they could edit their comment if they wanted (i already played all that's out weeks ago π€, so it wasn't a spoiler for me) and also thank you (Love the If/game btw, the characters are real and loveable)
I feel horrible about moving on after Els death! But T is so sweet π
guys i cried my heart out for elias , i felt every emotion there and her grieve was so heartbreaking. the nightmares and the empty house . and the cat , my god i really cant move on , elias was too good